Illustrations are useful for helping readers really understand the feeling or situation you’re trying to convey. Here are some examples of how you might illustrate; anything from “falling asleep and waking up from sleep” to “being afraid”.
I will be taking notes from the books I’ll be reading to build this phrase bank.
References: American Gods
- FACIAL EXPRESSIONS
- She twisted her mouth wryly, like she was tasting something she disliked.
- More food than any one person could eat
- Waking up: “….Someone was shouting, someone was shaking his shoulders, he wanted to say leave me but it came out as a grunt”.
- Procession of fat black turkeys like a line of mourners.